Chuck has us writing about 'hope in the face of hopelessness'. This is my attempt - after my first 2 crashed and burned terribly.
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I ran through the deserted landscape of the city, where nothing grew, where very little hope lived, where...
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I ran through the deserted landscape of the city, where nothing grew, where very little hope lived, where...
...I ran as fast as I could to get away from
the footsteps I could hear gaining on me.
They were getting closer and I was lagging
quickly.
A hand grabbed my shoulder and yanked me
around to meet that face, that horrible old face of a man who had seen
something in me I didn’t want him to see. His voice was haggard, “You are our
last hope.”
“Get off me! Where did you come from?” I
shoved him hard and he fell down wheezing, repeating that line which made me
sound like I was some stupid character out of a George Lucas movie from the
1970’s.
I ignored him as I turned and kept running.
I had to get away from him.
I had to get out of the city.
I had to...
A truck screamed around the corner, lights
on high beam blinding me. It almost ran me over as it stopped metres in front
of me. I had fallen into the broken, dried-up, hot street. With the sun beating
down all around me, I was short of breath, my lungs burning as hot as the
broken road beneath me – feeling the weight of my pack on my back.
“You!” A strong voice called from the driver’s
side window, “Get up!”
I looked up into the glare of the midday
sun, squinting did nothing to help me, “Who’s that?”
A door opened and closed and gentle hands
helped me to my feet, “Come on. You need help before anything else happens to
you.”
I heard a door on the side of the truck open
and I was assisted inside to the coolness of what turned out to be a van. The
interior light turned on as my pack was removed from my back and my hands were
looked at carefully by a young girl next to me, “Who are you?” I asked.
“They found me too. They thought I was the
Last Hope, but turned out I was just another girl who could join the city.” She
started cleaning the burns on my hands gently after turning on a headlamp I
hadn’t noticed.
I don’t remember how long we were travelling
for.
I just remember arriving at a place where it
looked like people had been working since...
...since everything fell apart.
The door opened. The driver helped me out, “Welcome
to The New City. We don’t have a name for it yet.” He looked down at me as he
removed his gloves and wiped his face with a handkerchief he had pulled from
his pocket, “I’m sure you’ll tell us your name in due time. Without any
computers, records or anything hi-tech, we’re well and truly on our own. So,
you can make up your own name or give us your birth name.” He turned to walk
away, “You can call me Rae – like rays of the sun.”
“Okay... I’m Hope.”
Rae turned and walked back to me, “We don’t
have anyone with your name yet.”
I shrugged on my pack, “Where can I sleep?”
“Shanni can show you. You’ll be in the women’s
quarters.” Rae said as he turned and walked off.
A day or so passed and I had a doctor look
at my hands. I surprised the woman when she pulled the bandages from my hands
and found the burns were almost healed.
“These were really badly burned from the
road.” Shanni said, “How can you heal so fast?”
“I have to take blood as well. We have to
start our blood bank again, seeing everything went off-line during the
Environmental Planetary Change.” The doctor took out everything she needed for
a blood test, “We have to know what blood type you are, if you have any
illnesses and if you’ve been in contact with anyone with any diseases you might
have caught before coming here.”
I nodded, “No problems.”
I wasn’t allowed to walk around the city for
a while. The doctor had come back to the women’s quarters with guards and asked
me to ‘follow’ her without an explanation; and I was in the hospital section of
The New City.
Rae was called to have tests done, so was
anyone in the van who had been with me. But he was permitted to be with me in
the room while they ran the tests – just in case we both had something which
was the same.
He glared at me as I sat on the wide window
sill, “What did you do!”
Looking over at him, I shook my head, “I don’t
know. I don't remember too much before you picked me up.”
“What do you mean?”
“How long has the world been like this?”
He looked outside at the dim and dead world,
“About a year or two.”
I don’t remember anything before you picking
me up. I was running away from somebody. They called me the Last Hope... but I
thought they were mad.” Looking over at him, I saw his face change as he sat on
the end of bed slowly, “What is it, Rae?”
“It is you.” A smile grew slowly on his face
as tears glimmered, filling his eyes and ran down his cheeks, “I can’t believe
I found ...” he looked down to his hands sniffling, “My god, you’re really
here.”
Slipping off the window sill, I walked to
him, “I’m just a girl.”
“No.” He looked up at me smiling through his
tears, “You are the only girl here in The New City with the name of Hope. You
have an extremely rare blood type which had cured three patients of diseases we’ve
been battling since the city opened and there’s no candles in this room because
you’ve been using it. The rest of the hospital has no electricity – just this
room.” He pulled off his gloves to reveal he had eczema scaling up his hands.
Looking at me, he reached out and touched my arm. Almost immediately, his
right hand cleared up at that gentle touch, “Where did you come from?”
I shook my head, “I don’t know.” Turning from
him, I wished I knew what happened to the world, when I only had a few days’
memory of it, “I’m new to this planet, to life like this. I don’t know how all
of this works.” I looked outside as tears blurred my vision, “But I want to go
home.”
Thunder cracked outside as clouds quickly
gathered towards The New City. Rain began to fall against the window as I felt
as homesick as I’m ever going to feel.
Rae knelt beside me, “I know why you were
running.” He looked out at the rain falling from the sky, “And I haven’t seen
it rain like this in ages. But you are Hope – the hope everyone needs here. You
are the last hope for the planet; and that last hope is rain.”
“No, actually, she’s not the rain.” The doctor
said from the door, “But I’d be very careful about Hope.”
I looked up at her, “Why be careful about
me?”
“Because, Hope, nobody has seen you eat
anything since you arrived; and I know why.” She smiled, “We have before us the
very spirit of the planet – I believe your real name is Gaia, but you go by the
human name of Hope.”
I nodded, “Yes, hope is less weird. But I
haven’t been here for so long.” I looked outside again at the rainstorm I had
created, “What happened? I left you all a planet which was going so well.”
“How long has it been since you have been
here?” Rae asked.
“About a million years.”
He smiled, “A lot happens in a millions
years.”
“Well, Humans weren’t here.” I muttered
touching the glass and making it rain harder, “You badly need rain. Can’t do
much about the bees.”
“Was that our fault?” the doctor asked.
“No. Evolution... bound to happen.”
“So, what are you doing here?” Rae asked.
I smiled, “You live here and you need help.
God’s left the building; and I’m here to clean up his mess.”
“So, you really are our last hope in all of
this.” Rae said.
I touched his other hand, clearing up the
rest of his eczema, “Yes. But I can’t stay here in The New City to do my work.”
“But we need you.” The doctor blurted.
Rae turned on her, “Don’t be selfish... Hope
isn’t here to garnish your needs, she’s here for the planet.”
“Rae, I’ll be needing your help first.” I
smiled.
He turned, “What’s that?”
“After I’m gone from here, you will be the
last hope the place has.” I said.
“No I’m too old.”
“When I cleared up your skin problem, I
handed on my powers. Once I’m gone, you’ll have them all.” I smiled, “You will
have all the know-how to keep this planet on its feet right from The New City.”
“I thought you...”
“Now, you are the last hope for mankind to
get it right this time.”
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