Chuck has been getting lines from us lately. First it was a 5-word title. Then, there was a first line... then a last line. This week, it's all pulled together and we're picking 1 from a list of 10 each, and using them in our own stories... mine's biblically scientific and weird...
enjoy.
No one had bothered to tell her about this
part.
Which part?
Well, stick around, buddy, and follow along.
Who’s she? The cat’s mother... well, okay
sarcasm never got me anywhere, but who I am, isn’t important. She’s Eve... the
important one, the one who we’re here about.
She started her life in a hospital – like everyone
does – and she never left.
Well, that was the plan.
We were going to make her the first one to
plug into the first totally automated computer system which would be controlled
by a human... Eve was perfect in every way. She was smart. Her gene pool was
immaculate. There was nothing wrong with her DNA...
Like I said: Eve was perfect.
As for the name? Well, there had to be a
first, right? We did have a Lilith, but she kinda shat all over the systems and
blew up our computers. So, we had to let her grow up in an ordinary family...
yes, like in the Bible, she was ejected from this perfect garden that Eve was
in right now.
The perfect, computerised matrix of a garden
this little girl was growing up in.
Eve is now six years old; even though she’s
not chronologically that age. She’s been growing quickly since she was born,
and her metabolic rate has increased so fast, we didn’t know how to slow it
down – but really, who would want to?
I did, but I was vetoed from doing that. I
was also vetoed from teaching her anything old-fashioned – like traditional
books, turntables, television sets or Corningware.
Actually I’ve been demoted to just observing
and being her biographer; and I’m not permitted near her without another
scientist watching me. This means I can’t talk to her.
But she’s been talking to me... not
physically talking, I can hear her voice in my head. There’s is a problem, I
don’t know how to talk back. I tried thinking things back to her, but I scored
a huge headache in return, which levelled me for over a day.
In this day and age, that’s unusual – to have
headaches anymore. Nobody in the Human Race gets them. It’s just not something people
talk about... there’s a lot of things we don’t say to each other anymore;
seeing the internet has made it so easy to keep us from actually talking to
each other in the same room.
Everything is done through texts, on social
media and other such forms. Nobody says anything to anyone in person – and this
has made socialising so impossible for Eve. She’s not used to talking to
people... and so she’s never been taught to speak.
Then the other day, as the other scientist
was leaving the room with me, I felt her voice, ‘Andrew, can we... communicate?’
I stopped, turned and looked at her. Eve had
just turned eighteen and was growing up so fast. She was starting to push
boundaries and the other scientists were becoming concerned about how she was
pushing the matrix to its limits. I wasn’t. My children had grown to this age
and were rebelling... the other scientists were still young, had just met their
DNA-set partners and had mated with them for the next generation of Perfection Children
– children without any diseases, any problems handed down through generations
of bad DNA. That part of the population were figured out and ‘fixed’ so they
were not permitted to have children... it was so dreadfully scientific and
demeaning.
“Dr. Simmons... come with us now.” Rick
snapped, “You are not allowed to speak with the specimen.”
“She has a name.” I said, “Can’t you hear her
asking questions?”
“She
doesn’t speak.” He shouted, “Now, get outside!”
I cast a glance at Eve as she stood, raised
a hand to Rick and he was thrown out into the hall and the door slammed hard;
the locks thunking home in the floor and ceiling. She turned to me, opened her
mouth and a squeak came, ‘Teach me to
speak... I’ve a voice box but without an opinion of my own. I can read, but I
can’t speak... this is painful.’
“They’ve made sure you can’t voice your own
opinion on purpose.” I said, “And they’ve kept me away from you so you don’t
learn old-fashioned things.”
A smirk grew on her face, ‘Old-fashioned things... I am older than you
think. I am not eighteen... I am far older than ...’ she looked at me as
she reached out and touched my arm, ‘I need
to get out of here... soon, there are things I need to do which are to do with
the world; which I can’t do from here.’
“What are those things?”
‘Dr.
Simmon... have you ever wondered who my parents were? Have you met them? Did
you see me born? Or did I simply show up here as a baby and grew swiftly?’ she looked around
the large windowless room.
I frowned, checked my dates and data, “I don’t
remember seeing anyone being pregnant here... I just remember being put onto
this... oh, you seemed to have come from nowhere.”
She nodded, ‘I need to get out of here... but I’m trapped.’
I quickly looked around the room, behind
cabinets, curtains, desks, and other objects and found markings on the walls
which looked strange, “What are these?”
Eve looked at them, ‘They’re keeping me in... and others away from me, so nobody can find
me. Break them!’
Picking up a pen, I began scribbling them
out. At the last one, I turned to see Eve standing there, naked, golden light emanating
from within her, around her and she was smiling. She held her hand out to me, I
took it, and in a blinding flash we were somewhere completely different.
“Where are we?” I asked.
She smiled, “We are in the Darkened
Underworld; the world where you never see. This is the world where Lilith was
sent because she thought for herself too much. Nobody cares about this world...
this is where those poor people live who are ‘fixed’ and aren’t allowed to have
those Perfect Children.” She looked over at me, “This is what you’ve been so
curious about.”
I thought I was going to be sick and covered
my mouth, “Oh my god.”
“I can fix this.”
“You can speak.”
“I could always, but not in that place...
you helped me. Now, let me help you.” She smiled, turned toward the edge of the
cliff we near as she let go of my hand.
“Hey! Stop! What are you doing?” I rushed
forwards and grabbed her arm.
With tears streaking her face, Eve
half-turned to me, as we heard from the darkness beyond an angry ocean, felt
the salt-spray against our skin, “For the light to cleanse the darkness, I must
die. These wings have never been used; so I don’t know how to fly... not even a
little.” She spread her wings and stepped off the cliff.
